Tuesday, July 25, 2006

We

We were so much in love. We made sacrifices...
I sacrificed myself, while she sacrificed me!

15 comments:

Ramses said...

Irony called life?

starry said...

Sometimes thats how it goes.thanks for stopping by my blog and do come again.

Aditi said...

Nice... I liked it

Ayshu said...

hmm..why this sudden thought? simple lines conveying so much!!Hope the one who has to read this gets the message!

seriously_frivolous said...

Ayshu,

It does right! loved reading it over and over again. However, it is not pertaining to my life. Fortunately for me I have been blessed with fairly positive and mutual relationships all my life. Initially wrote it in third person, but it dint seem strong enough, so changed it to "I". Had more effect.

A lot of what I write, while they are mostly my thoughts are not reflections of my personal life. Thats the reason I prefer maintaining the anonymity tag. I dont want those that know me to mis-intepret details.

seriously_frivolous said...

ramses,
Thanks for stopping by! Ya irony it is...and we still dont wanna accept it. Time heals...but how much time?

starry nights, aditi,

thanks for stopping by. Do keep visiting when you get a chance.

Ayshu said...

OK...Though you were lil hmmm rude in your response!Nope I agree its always nice to maintain the anonymity tag though I don't..Good that its not you!Would be difficult for anyone if this actually happens!!

seriously_frivolous said...

Ayshu,
Rude? Dint quite understand why. ne ways...I think a lot of times people believe that such a thing has happened to them, its all a making in the mind. If you learn to remove this time dimension from your mind (worrying about past and anxiety about future) things will way simpler. Not that I have learnt to do it, but I am trying.

Ayshu said...

interesting...easy to say but hard to practise I presume?
Should try it atleat!

contraddict said...
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contraddict said...

yo , those lines really rocked!! :D

Anonymous said...

Sometimes I feel love and sacrifice are inseparable. Its only that at times we tend to use the more mild term called 'compromise' in place of the stronger word. Wat say?

Arunima said...

we were madly in love,
me with you
you with you.

seriously_frivolous said...

Anonymous,

Ya...its like love thyself and sacrifice the other. Arunima's comment seems to testify this thought.

Pooja,
Thanks

Kay Vee said...

so profound!!